Opis obrazka po angielsku

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In the picture I can see young men. He is sitting in small dark room.He has black short hair.Boy is wearing casual clothes,blue,plain t-shirt.The foto was taken in the room.He has slim body.In the foreground see lots book,computer,telephon and two empty cups. In the background there is bed, behind yellow curtain.Boy is probably tired because he is learning long time before exam.I think he is supposed to be studing because he has got a book in front of hes.Probably he is typin on laptop. I suppose that he learning facts by heart.He seems to be sleeping.In my opinion men should has a nap.Boy look like on exhausted


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In the picture I can see A young men. He is sitting in A small dark room. He has GOT black short hair.THE boy is wearing casual clothes,blue and a plain t-shirt.The foto was taken in the room. He has A slim body.In the foreground I CAN see a lots of books ,computers ,telephonES and two empty cups. In the background there is a bed, behind a yellow curtain. THE boy is probably tired because he HAS BEEN learning a long time before exam. I think he is supposed to be studing because he has got a book in front of HIM.
"Probably he is typinG on laptop"<-co miałeś na myśli????
I suppose that he IS learning facts by heart.He seems to be SLEEPY. In my opinion he should take a nap because he lookS like on exhausted.

zapominasz przedimków, poprawiłam troche błędów. nie wiem o co chodzi ze zdaniem "probably he is typing a laptop. że pisał na laptopie czy jak? ale szyk itak powinien być mniej wiecej taki " He is PROBABLY typing a laptop."
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kisses, Kasia