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1.Edinburgh, Scotland's capital and second-largest city
2.Parliament House, in Edinburgh, is the home of the Court of Session
3.Loch Tummel in Perth and Kinross
4.Tiree, one of the sunniest locations in Scotland
5.Ben Nevis, the highest peak of Great Britain
6.The Quirang on the Island of Skye, part of the Scottish Highlands
7.Arthur's Seat
8.The museum and an Kelvingrove art gallery
9.Glasgow City Chambers viewed from George Square
10.Gilbert Scott Building, University of Glasgow
11.The Wallace Monument commemorates William Wallace, the 13th-century Scottish hero
12.Cathedral of Most saint Mary of the Virgo in Edinburgh
13.Cathedral St Mungo
14.A replica of the Pictish Hilton of Cadboll Stone
15.The biggest cave in Scotland - Durness
16.Holyrood palace
17.View of the castle Urquhart in the vicinity Inverness
18.Murrayfield Stadium - sports stadium
19.Easter Road -football stadium in Edinburgh
20.Amy Macdonaldthe - Scottish vocalist and the author of musical texts
21.Jimmy Somervillethe - Scottish singer and the vocalist
22.Kate Victoria "KT" Tunstall - the Scottish vocalist, the guitarist and the composer
23.Pipe band - Scottish orchestra