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opis osoby-pomoc

witam. czy mógłby ktoś mi pomóc i zerknąć na pracę przedstawiającą opis osoby? Jestem po ciężkich przeżyciach i niestety kiepsko mi wszystko idzie a nie chciałabym zawalić niczego w szkole. Z góry dziękuje za pomoc a oto tekst:

I want to describe person which is very important to me. My boyfriend's name is Peter. He's 20 years old. I love him because he is very emotional and hopeful. He has short blond hear and beautiful blue eyes. He is slim and medium-height, and good-looking. He doesn't have any freckles or tattoo.
He is very ambitious person but he isn't very confident . Peter is also very hard-working. He is always cheerful and has optimistic personality. My parents like him because he is sensible, intelligent and honest. They know that he is responsible and cares about me. I respect him because he is always calm and friendly. Everyone like him because Peter is so funny and energetic. He always make me happy.


I would like to describe a

I would like to describe a person which is very important to me. My boyfriend's name is Peter. He's 20 years old. I love him because he is very emotional and hopeful. He has short blond hair and beautiful blue eyes. He is slim, medium-height, and good-looking. He doesn't have any freckles or tattoos.
He is a very ambitious person but he isn't very confident . Peter is also very hard-working. He is always cheerful and has optimistic personality. My parents like him because he is sensible, intelligent and honest. They know that he is responsible and cares about me. I respect him because he is always calm and friendly. Everyone likes him because Peter is so funny and energetic. He always makes me happy.

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