Witam!
Czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić błędy w następującym liście nieformalnym?
Hi Micheal!
How are you? I hope you are fine. I am writing to you because I would like to tell you that I cannot see you. I was very happy with the trip to Liverpool unfortunately i am ill. A few days ago the weather was awful and I caught cold. Unfortunately, my plans are canceled out. I feel not so good and I have a headache. Yesterday I was at the doctor He said that my condition is not serious and have to be a few days at home. He recommended to use NoSpa. Despite disease i nice to spend time. I play on the computer and in the evening come to me Kamil. if you want I can come another time, or you visit me.I must go and clean my room.
Take care
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Hi Micheal! How are you? I
Hi Micheal!
How are you? I hope you are fine.
I am writing to you because I would like to tell you that I cannot visit you.
I was very excited about the trip to Liverpool, unfortunately I am ill and I am not able to go.
A few days ago the weather was awful and I caught cold.
As a result, all my plans are canceled.
I do not feel well and I have a headache.
Yesterday, I was at the doctor and he said that although my condition is not serious, I have to be a few days at home.
He recommended to take some pills.
Despite that I am trying to have a good time.
I play on the computer and in the evening my friend Kamil visits me.
if you want I could come another time, or you visit me.
I have to go now and clean my room.
Take care
Ogólnie myślę że jest dobrze
Ogólnie myślę że jest dobrze ale pewna nie jestem . ;-p