Far far away little girl lived in small house. She was Kate and she loved English language but she was too lazy to learn its. Kate relly wanted to speak and read in English but could not learn because she was to nervous and very unsystematic. Kate always was the worst at school and she had bad marks. Girl cried and she was very upset but she had too much lacks that she could not make its...to be conitinue...:)
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Thanks for your corrections :]
Now this text sounds better and look very nice:)
as they say you know nothing
as they say you know nothing so how can you correct other people...anyway, i will try....
that's how i would write
Far far away, there was a little girl who lived in small house. Her name was Kate and she loved English language but she was too lazy to learn it. Kate really wanted to speak and read English but could not learn because she was to nervous and very unsystematic. Kate always was the worst at school and she had bad marks. The girl cried and she was very upset but she had too much lacks that she could not make its...to be conitinue...:)
last sentence is a bit dodgy, i would say...
gd luck in learning english- the best language in the entire world!