You haven't written much, so there is not much to correct, but first of all, we do not write You with a capital letter!!!! Only I is written this way. You should be written - you not You.
When you say you hope something will happen, you usually use future simple, so
I hope you will show me my mistakes (correct my mistakes)
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You haven't written much, so
You haven't written much, so there is not much to correct, but first of all, we do not write You with a capital letter!!!! Only I is written this way. You should be written - you not You.
When you say you hope something will happen, you usually use future simple, so
I hope you will show me my mistakes (correct my mistakes)