jestem poczatkująca a juz kazali mi napisać rozprawke na temat wad i zalet przedłużenia wakacji. Sprawdziłby ktoś? To moja pierwsza
Nowadays, as recent reports in the media show the Polish government is considering a bill to prolong holidays. The supporters of this idea think about numerous advantages, but there are some obvious drawback involved.
Many people are convinced that longer holiday is capability of better refreshment. fresh employers and students are ready for service and also have a lot of ideas, which could make them rich people.
An additional advantage of holiday project is that it can allows families to close each others. Children will have an opportunity to know better their parents and they will be able to coddle babies and have fun with them.
On the other hand prolongation of vacation can have significant influence on education. Longest vacations mean shortest school year and more time spend at books. Teachers must assign more for home. Pupil’s moments of freedom would be stripped.
Moreover it is possible to include for disadvantages of summer holiday the threats, which waiting for independently leaving young people. Adolescents are not pass for cases sometimes, that if you will be progressed irresponsibly it can brings ugly memories.
Taking al this into account the positive points cannot be denied, but the negative one outweigh.
can allows = can allow - po
can allows = can allow - po modalnych nie można używać 3 formy z s
Longest vacations = Longer - w tym kontekscie lepiej pasuje longer niz longest
shortest school = shorter
Moreover it is possible to include for disadvantages of summer holiday the threats, which waiting for independently leaving young people. - stylistycznie do zmiany całe zdanie.
the negative one = ones - wcześniej mówisz o plusach w liczbie mnogiej, więc minusy też muszą być w mnogiej.