Proszę o sprawdzenie opowiadania

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Proszę o sprawdzenie opowiadania

Main character a story is my famili. It happened is last hoiday. We came back excursion at sea. We drove motoway. My dad drove on speed-ometer.
When we drove about few hours, suddenly behind a car we looked smoke. We think, that our a car be on fire. My dad fast (zgasił) a car. Everybody got out. We looked that disappear smoke. A mam, which was in car park help we called servise. It turned out that our car was broken.
We must came back travel, because our car leaved in work shop. Everybody felt disappointment, tired and sad. My dad was very wrong.


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The main characters of the story story are members of my family. It happened last holiday. We came back from a trip at sea.

(My dad drove on speed-ometer - ale o co chodzi?_

After a few hours of driving we noticed some smoke coming out of the back of the car. We thought that our car was on fire. My dad stopped a car and extinguished fire. Everybody got out of the car. We saw the smoke dissappear. A man who was in car parking helped us and called the service. It turned out that our car was broken.
We had to come back by train because our car was left in work shop. Everybody felt disappointment, tired and sad. My dad was very angry.