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I'm in Polend on a holiday. I'm disappointed because the weather is awful. Still is rain. I'm very missing meet my friends and our mutal event. I hope we're soon meet.


I'm in Poland on a holiday.

I'm in Poland on a holiday. I'm disappointed because the weather is awful. It is still raining (It rains all the time - mi bardziej pasuje). I cannot wait to
meet my friends at our annual event. I hope to see them soon.

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