Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie WAŻNE!!!!!

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Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie WAŻNE!!!!!

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Mam do napisania speech na temat opini o ubieraniu.Jeśli to było by to tak tragiczne to prosiłabym o napisanienowego.JA TO POTRZEBUJĘ NA JUTRO:(!!!!!!!!!!

In today's world clothes plays for people important part.Fashion changes very quickly though we draw out old-fashioned things often because they entered in fashion.For every person the style of clothes is crucial. Young people dress sportly, comfortably and casualiety. Clothes tesifes about man and if from him depends a lot of.To public places: theater, work office we have to walk smartly dressed. If it walks about shopping or go to the park we can go normally dressed.But the boss don't dress denims and sporty sweatshirt to work,only suit,white shirt and tie.The teacher of sport not dress smartly when he will learns on lesson he or she muss sportly dress.Often people estimate different by clothes because with him was can find out a lot of.My option shouldn't look how someone walks dressed because this from own style depends if it walks about office work and businesses having uniforms this is absolutly important.Young people read newspaper, they watch TV repay attention on fashion and they want later so same to walk dressed because they want to please.Pupils at some schools have duty to carry uniform and at different schools so it has not.Pupils shouldn't walk improperly dressed.On party to knows we get dressed casual and not smartly.Every people shouldn't look on fashion because from this can become addicted.I like sportly clothes because I feel good in him and when I go to the theatre I get smartly dressed.Anybody wants to different laugh with him that it walks old-fashion dressed and it is not fashionable.Brand name in fashion is for many people important.Every let it walks dressed in one's style to propery place.