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I live in the flat,which is close the city centre.Next to the flat is beatiful a lake. There are no shops in this street ,but is a scholl.I have got in the flat, two sitting rooms,one small a corridor and a bathroom. I live with my life partner and two sons.Older,Conrad are teen years old,Hubert are tonges has eight monts.My flat is a little but a cool.In first a sitting room is stand a sofa is big and leather.Next to the is (couch)(łóżeczko dziecinne).In front of is standing modern a furnitures,is a black.Next to the brown Tv cabinet stand a silver Tv set and srereo system,wideo casette recorder,compact disc player.On the floor is leyning brown a rug on witch stand big wooden a table and six chairs.On table is laying silk a tablecloth,and in the rase is a roses. It big a sitting room and have a big window, on the window is are hanging lece curtains.Hall is small there (w rogu) there is a wardrobe olive,next to the is an chest of drawers for shoes.Opposite a hall is a bathroom.In the bathroom is white bath and wahbasin and toilet. By is stand a washing machine.Over the wahbasin is small a shelf on the cosmetucs and mirror.In the hall also is a mirror only is a big.Second a room is small. There is corner sette (oraz) white wallunit.In a wardrobe this is clothings and in the shelf is a books and trinkets.Close a window a stand desk and computer.Next to the corner a sette layning a runner on the floor ,and on the wall is wisit clock and a posters.In the kitchen is beige a sideboard oposite sink and freezer klass A. My favorite room is big a sitting room and evenings is room rest in the which watch TV.It coisy flat,but want live in the bungalow,beacause here aren,t garden.


podziekowanie.

Super,dzieki serdeczne za pomoc .napewno jest lepiej niż ja napisałem.Ucze sie dopiero to poczatek nauki.dziekuje POZDEAWIAM,

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Chciałam tylko uprzedzić, że nie jestem profesjonalistką; moje poprawki to tylko sugestie ;0) W takim razie do dzieła...

My
elder son, Conrad is ten years old while the younger one, Hubert
is ....(i tu nie wiem o co chodzi w tekście/ co miałeś na myśli). As
far as my flat is concerned ( taki zwrot ozn. mniej więcej: wracając
do...) in the first sitting room stands a big leather sofa. Next
to the sofa there is a cot. In front of it there is
modern black furniture. Next to the brown TV cabinet are standing a
silver
TV set, stereo system, video cassette recorder and compact
disc player. On the floor lies a brown rug on which are standing a big
wooden
table with six chairs. On the table lies a silk tablecloth
and there stands a flower pot (wazon) full of roses. This sitting
room is big and there are big windows in which are hanging lece???
curtains. In my flat there is a small hall; in its corner stands an
olive wardrobe. Next to it stands a chest of drawers for shoes.
Opposite the hall there is a bathroom. In the bathroom there are a
white bath, washbasin and toilet by which stands a
washing machine. Over the washbasin is a mirror and a small shelf for
cosmetics. In the hall there is also a mirror which is bigger than the
one from the bathroom. A second room in my flat is small. There is a
corner settee and a white wall unit. In a wardrobe there are clothes
and on the shelves are books and trinkets. Close to the window
stands a desk and a computer. Next to the corner settee, on the
floor, lies a runner and on the wall are hanging a
waist clock??? and
posters.In the kitchen, opposite a sink and a freezer class A,
stands a beige sideboard. My favourite room is the big one in
which I rest best and watch TV. In general it is a cosy flat but I
prefer to live in a bungalow because here is no garden.

 

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I live in a flat which is close to the city center. Next to the flat there is a beautiful lake. There are no shops around, but there is  a school.In the flat I have got two sitting rooms, one small corridor and a bathroom. My flat is small but cool. I live with my partner and two sons.

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