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Dear Michael,
I am writing to apologise for not going your birthday party on Sunday. You can’t imagine had bad I feel. I would write to you to tell you why I didn’t come.
On Sunday morning my sister feel ill. She have terrible stomachache. I must with my sister leave to the doctor. The doctor says that she is ill (grypa żołątkowa) so my sister must stay in the bad at all time. I must with she stay in our home and care for her. That is why I going to your birthday party.
I hope you belive me I tell you how really sorry I am. Please let me to inviting you on a film “Nienarodzony” in the cinema next Sunday evening. Tickets on me. What do you think ??
Love,
xyz
Dear Michael,
I am writing to apologize you for my absence on your birthday party on Sunday. (You can’t imagine had bad I feel.) I'd like to tell you why I didn’t come.
On Sunday morning my sister felt ill. She had terrible stomachache. I have to stayed with my sister until the doctor came. The doctor said that she had stomach upset so my sister must stayed in bed. I have to stayed with her in home and took care of her. That is why I didn't come on your birthday party.
(I hope you'll belive me.) I'm really sorry. Please let me invite you on a film “Nienarodzony” in the cinema next Sunday evening. I'll pay for your ticket. What do you think ?
Love,
xyz
Ps. Mysle ze zdania w nawiasach sa zbedne. A tak nawiasem jeszcze to za duzo tych "stay" uzylas;) Ale to nic. Pozdrowka.!